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Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 12:30 pm
by Speedemon
Hello people of automation! This is my car company, Carbon. This is where I will post all my car ideas. I hope you like my designs! :D

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 2:44 pm
by Speedemon
Having trouble with screenshots. Can anyone help me?

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 2:54 pm
by jhd1124
Upload pictures to imgur. Then, use the BBC codes to paste onto here.

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 10:34 pm
by Kubboz
Or just use the forum's attachment system.

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 10:34 pm
by WizzyThaMan
Or wait for another 30 minutes and sign up on http://www.automationhub.net :D

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 9:10 am
by Speedemon
This is carbon's first actual Muscle Car. The first two cars I created had stupid engines and I did not realize it. Oops? :? This car is called the Carbon Canyon. It has a top speed of 184Mph ( Doing better! :) ). It uses a Turbocharged 6L V8 flatplane engine. I had to lower the RPM to 5000 to make it work, but it is still has a powerful engine!


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Better cars are coming! :D

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:02 pm
by Noporian
I like the front but the rear just kinda looks like a vent showcase. Like they haven't been edited at all and that they're just sort of there without purpose.

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:10 pm
by Jakgoe
Yeah, there seem to be about eight unnecessary stock vents on the back, but the overall look is pretty great.

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:51 pm
by Speedemon
Thanks for the feedback! I can get rid of some of the vents. Would that help? :?:

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 1:08 pm
by Jakgoe
I think so, be sure to post a picture!

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 1:39 pm
by Speedemon
Is this good?

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Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 2:23 pm
by SuperSportNick
Now it looks too simple, but at least it looks much better. It's difficult to tell you exactly what you need to do for it. IMO, this looks better than the first back end but also its too simple. Think diffusers, you need a rear aero lip, vents for rear brakes, a license plate holder, maybe some extra chrome bits, and stuff.

If you need more ideas, check out ManHell Automotive. Razyx is a power house when it comes to fixtures.

Of course you can leave it, it looks fine but just... kinda bland. Some sports cars IRL are like that.

EDIT: Also I'd like to see some stats :mrgreen: This might also be a competitor for the Aeroline Mongoose. Would like to see a sports car auto magazine with our cars in it! ohhhh utopia. :lol:

Mongoose vs. Fleetwood vs. Canyon... YES!

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2015 1:13 am
by Speedemon
All three cars together would be a nice challange. :D

Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2015 2:39 am
by Speedemon
This may be better. :)

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Re: Carbon Automotive

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2015 4:41 am
by Jakgoe
That looks very, very good, both the back and the front. The side, however, looks odd due to the vents. Perhaps only the one near the front wheel is necessary. But, as I asid earlier, this car is looking so good now, that any more criticism would be nit-picking.