The Ford Sierra Engine reviews

[Juno8]

Comment down below what I could do better please here or more likely on the video please guys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gpqK8-hPRjc

[Killrob]

1) Forum posts: Better punctuation and articulation in your forum posts.
2) Video length: Why watch a 20min video when you easily could fire up Automation yourself to play a scenario?
3) Pacing: The first minute's content could easily be compressed into 10 seconds. The first 6 minutes into about 45-60 seconds.
4) Non-useful information, lots of it: People with eyes can see what components were chosen, you just reading them out loud won't be of any use or interest to most people.
5) No content worthy of the viewer's time: You don't add any insights, analysis, interesting comparisons or fun anecdotes. At least one of these is a vital ingredient for good vids.

[xABSOLUTIONx]

1) Forum posts: Better punctuation and articulation in your forum posts.
2) Video length: Why watch a 20min video when you easily could fire up Automation yourself to play a scenario?
3) Pacing: The first minute's content could easily be compressed into 10 seconds. The first 6 minutes into about 45-60 seconds.
4) Non-useful information, lots of it: People with eyes can see what components were chosen, you just reading them out loud won't be of any use or interest to most people.
5) No content worthy of the viewer's time: You don't add any insights, analysis, interesting comparisons or fun anecdotes. At least one of these is a vital ingredient for good vids.

see, Killrob says the same thing as i do, just did format it better

FIX IT

[Juno8]

Thanks killRob