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Hi,
As this is my first post on this forum i'd like to introduce myself first.
I am a Mechanical Engeneering Student about to finish my study cicle, i'm 22 years old and trying to have a carrer in automation.

I have a project regarding the position control of a given load using a servo motor and before deliverying it i'd like to ask for your opinions about how good it is done. First of all i would like to have your thoughts on how well the diagram is built and if it is right to use it like this.


Thank you in advance for your time.

May want to move this to off-topic.

I'm new here and don't really know how to. Any hints please?

You know that this forum is about a game called automation rather than automating mechanical processes, right?

Also, if you are graduating, I reckon you should be able to tell whether or not the diagrams are good. I'm an engineer student myself, and I would say that the first diagram is rather badly organised and I have no knowledge on automation so far to be able to say anything about the second one.

xDDD my bad
the 1st one is not a diagram its from the problem itself.

Ty anyways