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Post Fri Jan 02, 2015 10:47 am

Re: Chapter 2

After Adam said that Kevin's AE86 has a 7A-G, He also said the suspension and thenbrakes are tuned for Touge,
It makes Hendra confused because Kevin bought the car cheap but it's havily modified
"Does the previous owner doesn't know about this legend?" Said Hendra
Hendra also asked Adam to do a dyno test for his AE110 and Kevin's 86
The results :
AE110
TRD Full Bottom end and Cams
AWD Gearbox, Triple plate clutch
Produces 210 HP @ 7800rpm
AE86
Tec-Art's 7A-GE with Rev Limiter @9500 rpm
ITB Intakes and TRD Two way LSD
Produces 242 HP @ 9500 RPM

"You are too lucky Kev, You always wanted an 86 that rev higher than 7000rpm and now you got it" said Hendra
"Hehehe"

At night they head to Puncak Mountain Pass just to watch pther cars racing there.. And Kevin meets his old friends Rayhan and Dimas, They 3 met on Facebook when they are still 13 and now they meet in real life and Dimas and Rayhan meets a new friend, Hendra..
At 10 pm, there are a bunch of supercars and they are going to the peak..
There are Lambos, GT-R's and Camaros
"Who's the leader? Why they are racing on a mountain?" Said Dimas
"Yeah, thats too dangerous due they are overpowered" Said Hendra
"Wait a minute, I think i know the guy on the Black Gallardo" said Kevin
It's Yazid.. He liked to bully Kevin because of Bimmers and 86's and other things he like
"Why the hell they go to Puncak just to race us? " Rayhan asked
"I think they want to finsih us... The leader of them bullied me and Hendra since we was high school" said Kevin
Yazid and the other guys approaches Kevin and his friends..
"Are u Kevin the one i used to bully?" Said Yazid
"...Yes" Kevin replied
" What a poor gang just using a Honda,Mitsubishi and a Toyota"
" Which one is fast? All of them easily finished by a Mercedes C63"
Yazid said all of the words that hurts.. It baits Dimas to get mad and then when Yazid see Dimas got mad, He told Fathur to use his Mercedes C63 to do a downhill race with Kevin and the uphill is Hendra with Yazid..
"I don't want see one of these guys fall into the cliff" said Rayhan.
"Puncak is a steep downhill and uphill, The supercars will go crazy when they go downhill" said Dimas
The AE86 and the Gallardo lined up and the race is starting
"10
"9
"8
"7
"6
"5
"4
"3
"2
"1
GO!!
*screeching sound*
The Gallardo has a better start because of 4WD and the Eight six is too slow for the Lambo on straights.."No one can pass a Gallardo even on mountains" said Yazid
When approaching the corner, The Lambo slows down from 170 km/h to 125km/h
When Kevin approaching the corner, he brakes a little. It makes the car slows down from 160 km/h to 140km/h and he drifts.
"What the heck is on that eight six? It drifts a little to kill the understeer"
It is a straight and then there is a sharp easy right
The peak of Puncak mountain pass is near the entry to Pasar Minang Street
And there is a splitting corner and the Lambo take the left lane and the 86 took the straight lane.
The eight six is shortening the gap on every corner
When they reach the corner on the bridge, the Lambo understeers from the inner lane to the outside lane and the eight six get in the Inner lane to go side by side with the Lambo..
Meanwhile at the peak
" The eight six is side by side with the Lambo, what the hell is on the eight six ?" Yazids teamates said that on the radio..
"Ask them how much horsepower that the eight six have and the type of the engine and the custom parts!" Said Yazid teamates again
Vandi, the Lamborghini Huracan driver is one of the guys who bullied Kevin and Hendra
He approach Hendra and ask him harshly
" What is the engine of the Eight six jackass? No one beats our leader!" said Vandi
"Well it's a 7A-GE. Its a 7A-FE with a 4A-GE and he didn't put a Turbo or a Supercharger on it, The..."
"SHUT UP!! JUST TELL ME HOW MUCH HORSEPOWER DOES IT HAVE AND THE PEAK POWER RPM AND HOW MANY CC DOES IT HAVE!!" Vandi cutted Hendra when he tells about the eight six
"It's 1800cc"
"It's a 4 cyl"
"It can produce 242 HP @ 9500rpm" Hendra said that and makes Vandi and the other of his teamates shocked.
And Vandi asked again " Who's the uphill driver?"
"I am, I'll driving uphill with my AE110" Said Hendra
"Specs?" Vandi asked again
" 210 HP @ 7800rpm and it's a 1600cc 4A-GE"
Name of Car Company: Efendi Motor Co.
Owner of company: Octan2013
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Post Fri Jan 02, 2015 4:08 pm

Chapter 3

After running side by side, The Gallardo runs away from the 86
"How can i win with this car? The Lambo has better acceleration.."
"After this left lane theres a right and theres a left again, Maybe i can shorten gap again" said Kevin
"Well i think i need to redline it to get my freaky power" said Kevin
The lambo's weakness is on the braking because Yazid learns about racing on track
He braked full power again..
Both shorten the gap when Yazid brakes
After 4 minutes they finally approached the tight corners..
There Yazid does the same like he did before, full braking
Kevin fell behind on the straights and then he shorten the gap again on those tight corners
"Crap, why my Lambo feels so slow today?" Said Yazid
"I don't get it why i lose to a pitty 86?"
And then at the hairpin near the minimarket, Kevin passed Yazid's Lambo..
"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON? WHAT THE HECK IS ON THAT 86''S?! A V8?! BUT WHY IT DOESN'T SOUND LIKE A V8?!"Yazid screamed
The finish is near, it's on the side of an Inn..
Kevin won, but it makes Yazid teamates mad,
On the uphill race, Hendra is racing with his AE111 and Fathur races with his C63,
The hillclimb is shorter than the downhill because they will turn around to do the downhill..
Theres a pylon in the middle of the street..
They just lined up and Dimas counts it for them
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
GO!!
*screeching sounds*
"I can't lose to a 210 HP Corolla Levin!" Said Fathur..
"Man, this will be tough since he have the power for uphill" said Hendra
But what happend is..
Fathur brakes his car to get behind Hendra..
"Man he braked on purpose to observe me, i gotta show 75% of myself" Hendra mumbles
When they reach the corner near the hairpins, Fathur tailgates Hendra and then
*BAM*
Fathur rammed Hendra's car, but he didn't spin out
"Lucky me... But he did that on purpose"
To be continued
Name of Car Company: Efendi Motor Co.
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Post Fri Jan 02, 2015 4:43 pm

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 3 on Page 2

I didn't join in on this because I couldn't think of a way to tie myself in, but I did want to say I am reading on with interest! Indonesian Initial D, go!
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Post Sat Jan 03, 2015 5:38 am

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 3 on Page 2

Thanks you very much strop..
This story also will be a very long story and the opponets will get stronger and stronger
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Post Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:01 am

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 3 on Page 2

Some art needs to be produced to go with this!
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Post Sun Jan 04, 2015 12:01 am

Re: Chapter 4

Hendra's Trueno BZ-R was rammed and nearly lost control..
He managed pass him on the hairpin turns and then win
"Here are the hairpins! I'll pass him here" said Hendra
Hendra takes the inner line and shortens the gap between his Trueno and C63
"Wha.. How in the world that BZ-R shortened the gap?"
"Hehehe.." Hendra laughes
"I'll show you the real potential of C63!!" Fathur screamed
He full throttled his C63 and then his car spins out
"Not good... I should avoid the C63.." Said Hendra
Hendra avoided the C63 and by the C63 spun out, Hendra wins the race
"YEAHHH... We've beaten those supercar punks!" Said Dimas (loudly)
"BANZAIIII!!!" Kevin said it loudly too

They head home after the race.. When they are heading home, They decided to eat at a Japanese restaurant there..
When they are eating, A white Silvia S14 with the gang parks there
"Sheesh, what are they doing here? " Said Dimas
"Ehmm i think they are looking for Kevin.. " said Rayhan
The S14 Driver is a girl named Lanny.. Kevin and Lanny raced before on puncak and when Kevin tries the pass her, She bumped Kevin into the gutter and he crashed into a guardrail.
"I don't have business with them at all" Kevin replied
"It's because of they hurt your S13 right" Hendra asked
"Lets act normally like we don't know them"
"She bring her friends to finish us" Said Kevin
They entered to the restaurant and they only go to the 4 guys table
"Do you guys know where can i find Kevin? The guy with a junk AE86?" She asked
"No at all.. I don't k..." Hendra cutted
" I think those cars are junk and they can be smoked by my S14 easily" Lanny cutted Hendra
" My Silvia has 380 HP and it is invincible.. None of your cars can beat mine" She said
" I want to beat the 86 and the Toyota Starlet.." Lanny said
*S14 door slam*
*RB20 sound*
"Who the hell drives a Starlet?" Rayhan asked
"If you only bore it up and you do a porting balance, You can smoke a Honda Accord Maestro! It's the 1989 Starlet!" Dimas said
"It must be someone who have mountain pass skills" said Hendra
The next day, Hendra goes to the AD Speedshop and he meets Conan and David
" Hi guys! Whats up?" said Hendra
"Hey it's you Hendra, Have you heard about the Toyota Starlet?" Conan asked
"Yeah he is also fast.. As fast as Kevin.. I heard he knows Kevin" Said David
"What is on the engine bay?! a tweaked 5E-FTE?" Hendra got shocked
"Just the original 3E and he only do oversize and change the exshaust header and porting balance" David replied
"HAA!! WHAT IS THAT THING?!!" Hendra screamed
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Post Fri Jan 09, 2015 4:43 am

Chapter 5

Chapter 5
17:00 pm
Kevin's house
TV Room
"Hendra, You're going to race Lanny's No.2 Racer!" Kevin said
"Wha....Are you kidding? With my AE110 I'll lose! It's on Asia Afrika street dude not on Puncak!" Hendra replied
"Hmm.. Follow me now" Kevin said
"What is it bro?" Hendra asked
"The secret is going to be revealed" Kevin replied
"Wha... How do you get these? And why they are on your back garage?" Hendra replied

17:50 pm
AD Speedshop
"What?!" Adam surprised
"Those are treasures! How do you get these Kev?" Aaron asked
"Just imported and these two arent replicas and the black thing is not the kit car from the Rover" Kevin replied
"Can you guys make the power distrubution 40/60? And can you guys do a quick tune up?" Hendra asked
"Okay, Here we go, Man it's the first time i touch these cars!" Said David
Kevin and Hendra walked around to see AD Speedshops race cars and demo cars
Allison drive her Golf to AD Speedshop and she asked for a dyno test on it
"Kev check out this GC8!" Said Hendra
Kevin's gone
"Wha.. Where did he go?" Said Hendra
Kevin is chatting with Allison, Hendra approaches Kevin and then catches him
"Are you kidding Kev? Street racers don't need girlfriend!" Hendra said
"CUT IT OUT HENDRA!" Kevin said
" Ah sorry.. He's just a bit forgot about his crush!" Said Hendra
"Hendra, i'm just friends with her!" Said Kevin
"By the way, where are those treasures come from?" Allison asked
"You mean those two 80's - 90's rally car?"
"They are imported" Hendra replied
"Oh ok.. Those cars are awesome! " said Allison
"This girl is a car girl! And shes cute!" Kevin said it on his head
"Are you guys going to race on Asia Afrika Street? I'm going there tonight.. I'm going to see Lanny's racers! I heard there are two persons using AE86 and AE110 will race them tonight" said Allison
"Yeah, the AE86 and AE110 guys are us, we're tonight using these rally cars" Kevin replied
"Oh... Good luck guys!" Allison said
And she goes in to the shop
"I'm going to check my Cossie" Kevin said
"I'm not letting you to get it before you tell me why you are blushing when you said you and her are friends" Hendra said

20:00 pm
Asia Afrika street
"Here they are! Lanny's gang is here! Where are the Trueno duo?" Josh said
"They are using rally legends today.." Allison replied
"How do you know, Aly?"
"I met them at AD Speedshop" Allison replied
30 minutes later
"Where are the Trueno duo's? They are not here yet!" One of the crowd said
"They must be scared of my RB" Lanny said
"Those two, where are they?" Josh said it on hesd

21:00 pm
AD Speedshop
"Thanks guys! We're going now.." Kevin said
"Okay Kev! Good Luck! You guys will win" Aaron said

21:30 pm
"Here are the twin Rally cars!!" One of the crowds said
"How did they get these cars?!" Joshua surprised
"Kevin uses the RS200 and Hendra uses the Lancia Delta HF Intregale! This battle is crazy!!" Dimas said
"Dude whats that girl's name?" Rayhan asked
"Are you kidding Rayhan?" Dimas replied

Kevin's RS200
Custom parts : LSD, Misfiring System, Higher boost pressure, Custom Exhaust header
420HP Total
Hendra's Lan Delta HF Intregale
Custom parts : Custom Cams,Valvetrains,Exhaust Header, Porting Balance, Bored up, Titanium Conrods, 440 HP Total
Name of Car Company: Efendi Motor Co.
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Post Fri Jan 09, 2015 1:22 pm

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 5 is here

The lone girl in the story sure seems to stir up a rukus... :lol:
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Post Fri Jan 09, 2015 3:26 pm

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 5 is here

Do you notice there is another girl in this story? Well now this story has two girls and in later chapters, i think there will be more characters
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Post Fri Jan 09, 2015 7:39 pm

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 5 is here

How does one apply to join in on this story?
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Re: Racers Story - Chapter 5 is here

Just tell me the car you want to use in this story and you're in
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Post Tue Jan 27, 2015 9:55 pm

Chapter 6

Kevin and Hendra just arrived at Asia Afrika Street,
"This must be a sprint race!" said Hendra
"This is a drag race" said Kevin
Dimas and Rayhan surprised that Kevin uses a RS200 and Hendra uses a Lancia Delta HF Intregale
"YOU ARE KIDDING ME!! HOW DO YOU TWO GET THESE TWO RARE CARS?!" Dimas screamed to Kevin
"Just calm down dude, I just restored these two and put some perfomance parts!" Kevin replied
Lanny said that it will be her driving an Evo 8 to race Hendra
Hendra's Lancia Delta interior is stripped and it only has a radio
"Hendra, the horn button is not a horn button! This car doesn't have a horn" said Kevin
"So what is it for?"Hendra asks
"When you can see that Evo's tailights, you'll find out" Kevin replied
The countdown started
10
9
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
The Evo got a headstart due to it's bigger power. The evo has 600 HP and Hendra's Lancia Delta just only 450 HP
"Man, It's faster than my Lan Delta" said Hendra
"Tha piece of junk will disappear from my rearview mirror! That guy is very dumb for putting a Lancia Delta between an evo!" Said Lanny
Lanny uses the NOS after getting the headstart and it makes Hendra panicked
And then it's already in the halfway, it makes Hendra even more panicked
"I should press the horn!" Hendra said
*press* "Whaaaatt is on this Lancia DELTA?!!!!" Nitrous ooonnn it?!!" Hendra surprised because the horn button is not a horn buton but it activates the Nitrous! The Delta passed the Evo 8 and it makes the crowd dont believe what they saw.. An old Delta passing an Evo 8
"That freaking punk! They must be cheating! I hate that Delta!" Said one of the guys in Lanny's gang and then Lanny called some bad guys to kill Kevin and his friends.
Hendra's Delta parked near Rayhan's EG9 and they see Kevin running to them.
"Get in the car! Now you need to put these Walkie-Talkies on your car and because we need to talk when we are driving!" said Kevin panicked
"Why so panicked Kev? I just win the race and you told us to run away!" said Hendra
"Okay! We're going to be chased by bad guysnfrom Lanny because she is upset of your winning and they bring guns and they will shoot us!" Kevin explained
"What the heck is going on?! Standby in the car now! They would bring Lan Evos and we will die because they catch up with us and shoot us!" Dimas told them

00:40
Dimas'es handphone rings and its from Rayhan
"We have company here... And they bring SL65 AMGs" said Rayhan on phone
Rayhan ran from 7-Eleven to his car and then stand by with his friends
"That Delta, kill him with his friends! Including the RS200, Lancer and the EG!" said Lanny
And they chase Kevin and his friends "Two black SL65 are on my side! And they are bumping me !" said Hendra
After bumping Hendra, Kevin crashed the rear right wheel of the SL65 and it makes them spin out
Kevin and his friends hide at a dark place and then get out from the car
"Where are they?!" Kevin asked Rayhan
"They are on our back! RUN!" Rayhan screamed
They shoot Hendra's Lancia Delta and run away
"Damn it! They shooted the Nitrous!" Hendra tell them to run away and then Hendra is a passenger on Kevin's RS200
The Lancia Delta explodes and it sends out Kevin and Hendra stressed out.
Their pre-teenhood just ruined
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Post Tue Jan 27, 2015 10:11 pm

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 6! Pre-teenhood ruined by bad guy

nooooooooooooooooo the Delta! AVENGE THE DELTA!
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Post Wed Jan 28, 2015 3:39 am

Chapter 7

Chapter 7
Hendra and Kevin just don't believe what they saw, A Lancia Delta exploded.
"Hendra,Get your AE111 and go away to Puncak now! Go to Bandung and get on an inn but get there from Puncak!" Said Kevin
"Now go! I'll be there too with Dimas and Rayhan" Kevin continued
Hendra got in to Rayhan's EG to go to his house to get the AE111
Kevin lure the bad guys to a highway and they chase Kevin
"Someone need to stop that RS200! Get the Electrical Gun!" Said the bad guys on walkie talkie
Kevin got in to their walkie talkie's frequency and he hears every words the bad guys spoke
"What the hell is an Electrical Gun?" Said Kevin on head
"Shoot it now!" Said the bad guy
They shooted Kevin with EMP and it makes Kevin's RS200 lost control and the engine gone overheating..

10:00 am, At a villa at Puncak
"Where is Kevin? He said he'll be here" Ask Hendra
"I dont know" Rayhan replied
"Hey guys!" Dimas running to Hendra's room
"Kevin is on a warehouse! He's tied there by those bad guys!"
"Whaaatt?!" Hendra and Rayhan got shocked
They head to the Warehouse with panic
Meanwhile at the warehouse
Kevin just opened his eyes again because of when the car stopped, he was punched by one of the bad guys
"Wait my hands are tied to the steering wheel?! What are they doing to me?!" Kevin ask himself
"Hello, Good morning bastard!" Say one of the bad guys named Zuki
"Why do you shoot me with the EMP?! What for?!" Kevin ask to him
"We're here to hurt and crush the old cars lovers and their cars"
"What is it there Kevin? Your cute AE86?" said Lanny
"It's going to die after this RS200 die!!" Lanny continues
There are many old cars lovers there and there are blood on the corner of the room,
There are also many E30, E36, Lancia Delta and many more scraped there
Kevin's RS200 lifted with a magnet to a car compactor and it drops it
Kevin pulls his hands to make them get off from the ties
He also breaks the front windshield to get off from the RS200 and get a trailer hooked on his AE86 and bringing a Lancia Delta HF Integrale Evo that has no owner and it was going to the car compactor too.
"That is a sound of an old engine! It must be him running away!! Hurry up grab him! Grab him!" Said Zuki
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Post Thu Jan 29, 2015 8:49 am

Re: Racers Story - Chapter 7 The RS200!

I got bored, so I made some art. Other protagonists coming later, as well as cars.
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It's too dark to see, but Kevin has brown eyes and Hendra has hazel eyes.
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